One night in the dark, I had a tempting heart,
Hesitation of relation creates my limitation.
I was calm and steady to hold my heart in my palm.
I knew it would be a start, and I made myself to the part.
I thought it will be my comma for another well,
But it made me fell.
Chances are odd, but I see a bud.
I thank you for the stop,
there is no right or wrong.
just a matter of yes or no.
I smell your heart,
and I knew I am hurt.
wishin' everything will be fine.
so I can leave it all behind.
Comma comes before Period.
and now I shall make it to an end.
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nice one
words of feeling..nothing much...thanks though.
我可不可以copy到我的無名??
個人的心情創作而已 拿去用吧
你笑什麼 壞蛋
沒有啊 只是在想你是不是又用翻譯器在翻 哈哈。
嘖嘖 我不要理你了
這是 見笑轉生氣嗎？
見你笑我就不生氣了 哈
有看到你努力轉諧星的意念（咖啡）
機車 我是關心你好不好 哪有要搞笑 ==
好啦 收到 （放在保險櫃裡）
英文看不懂 XD 我可以在這裡問你中翻英的句字嗎:~~~
一個字五塊... 好啦 我再想想要不要翻譯 因為英文都是有押韻了 翻成中文沒那感覺
哈囉樓上的 用這個 http://www.mytrans.com.tw/newmytrans/ 不無小補啊 （茶）
http://babelfish.yahoo.com/ 這也不錯啊，我出國都用這跟歐洲人溝通。
yes, comma comes before period; there can be more than just one comma. what if everything isn't ready for an end? what if you give up too quick to see the real end? there will be many more "what if" if you give up too soon and miss your chance. just always think twice if you can so you can live your life with no regret!! cheer ~
well, no regret, maybe. There is no gurantee, but if I chosen it or given up...I have to take every step i've made, u knew it. thanks for your advice, I know what you're tryin to tell me, but guess I would be happier if I gave up. appreciated...
英文欠佳~~ 看不懂XD 不過那張圖片還蠻出現的就是了 有某種程度的熟悉感~0~ XD
沒什麼大不了啦 只是個心情書寫而已 噗。 （照片 人人得以偷之？） 呵呵...
yes, comma comes before period; 逗號的確是出現在句號的前面 there can be more than just one comma. 但是句號的前面 可以有不只一個的逗號 what if everything isn't ready for an end? 如果所有的事情並不是準備好結束 what if you give up too quick to see the real end? 如果你太早放棄 就看不到真正的結果 there will be many more "what if" if you give up too soon and miss your chance. 那就會有很多的 "如果" 跟 "也許" 因為放棄的太早也失去機會 just always think twice if you can so you can live your life with no regret!!做什麼事情如果能多想一想 就不會有個後悔的人生 cheer ~ 乾杯吧 哈哈哈 翻的超爛的 請大家一起大笑三聲 哈哈哈
yes, comma comes before period; 當然，每個結束前總是會有峰迴路轉。 there can be more than just one comma. 只是過程中的精彩度皆有不同。 what if everything isn't ready for an end? 若是這是一場未完成的劇本。 what if you give up too quick to see the real end? 若放棄了你將失去結局的門票。 there will be many more "what if" if you give up too soon and miss your chance. 若提早放棄了 你將會失去通往未來的道路。 just always think twice if you can so you can live your life with no regret!! 凡事多思考你的人生不會有後悔。 cheer ~ 加油 哈哈哈 翻的超好的 請大家一起讚嘆三聲 讚讚讚
我喜歡這句Comma comes before Period. and now I shall make it to an end. 但是好悲喔!!
謝謝喜歡啦... 是啊有感覺的人才寫得出來這種東西...嗚嗚...